On English Bay
---- Jimmy Wong
----Feb 28, 2018
The sea is wide and cold.
The sky is vast, hurray!
The wood is still and old.
It is silent on English Bay.
I am ponering,
With no sorrow, my dear Rick.
The waves are thundering.
I am a bit homesick.
To go or to stay,
"This is the question?" I should say.
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推荐理由:小诗主题--人与自然; 韵律结构:ABAB, CDCD, EE;观察细致,语言简约朴实。 - Brown Beaver 7年前
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我打算推荐小吉米的英文小诗到儿童诗刊上发表,试一试。 - Brown Beaver 7年前
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噢,typo----pondering, not ponering. Sorry. - Brown Beaver 7年前